From e3d6ab1a817c4f243bead01975063e2e21cc8fed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: onpon4 Date: Thu, 11 Jun 2015 23:14:46 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] More dialog tweaks. --- data/brief10.txt | 10 ++++------ data/brief12.txt | 2 +- data/cutscene4.dat | 6 ++++-- 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/data/brief10.txt b/data/brief10.txt index bb4edb4..933a01e 100644 --- a/data/brief10.txt +++ b/data/brief10.txt @@ -1,7 +1,5 @@ -Phoebe Lexx +Sid Wilson +FACE_SID +A WEAPCO scientist just ran off in an escape pod. If we capture him, we may be able to get some information about Mordor. FACE_CHRIS -A WEAPCO scientist just ran off in an escape pod. I'm going after him. -FACE_PHOEBE -Do you need some backup? -FACE_CHRIS -Nah, that would just complicate the search. +Alright. I'm going after him. diff --git a/data/brief12.txt b/data/brief12.txt index 0aea37b..906efd8 100644 --- a/data/brief12.txt +++ b/data/brief12.txt @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Sid Wilson FACE_CHRIS What have you managed to find out about that experimental fighter? FACE_SID -It's got some kind of cloaking device that makes it invisible to radar. Could prove hard to trackdown. +It's got some kind of cloaking device that makes it invisible to radar. Could prove hard to track down. FACE_CHRIS I'll scout the system and see if I can intercept it. FACE_SID diff --git a/data/cutscene4.dat b/data/cutscene4.dat index 1b2623a..a1c16ad 100644 --- a/data/cutscene4.dat +++ b/data/cutscene4.dat @@ -28,8 +28,10 @@ He did put up one hell of a fight! He didn't stick around for long, though. I gu FACE_CHRIS Anyway, what's the scoop on Mordor, Sid? FACE_SID -Well, it seems WEAPCO is testing some new fighter craft there. We should destroy it to thwart its development. +I've learned from the scientist we captured that WEAPCO is testing a new fighter craft there. FACE_CHRIS -Sounds like a plan. +We should probably destroy that craft, then. We might be able to thwart its development somewhat. +FACE_SID +Agreed. FACE_PHOEBE I wonder if my sister will be here...